She has a secret that she can never tell
About how once in love, she had fell
She thinks her friends would not understand
If her friends ever saw them holding hands
She keeps it inside though it is eating her so
She knows her true love she can never show
So she cries in bed alone, dreaming every night
From her parents keeps her tears out of sight
She washes her face as she buries her pain
It burns her heart like an ever-internal flame
Finally, the pain inside she had to get rid of
When she died, no one ever knew she had loved
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Sadly...
this is true for many. Love of any kind should not hurt, but sometimes it does. Having had the courage to hide it, might have been hard, but the right thing to do. Sometimes, we have to make sacrifices for the people we love and those who love us. I felt this one like a punch in the jaw. I remember...
~ Geez.
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Thanks Geezer
Shivers down my spine dude,
Shivers down my spine dude, wonderful use of words and pacing... felt like it was picking at a scab for me
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Thanks M4
Her Secret
I know a few circumstances where people hid their love for quite some time, causing and enduring so much sadness. Your poem reflects that.
Thank you,
L
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Thanks for reading Lavender