lovedly
lovedly
Dec 10, 2022

VEIL OF TIME

Last night I was walking
in the middle of the darkest night
in search of what is hidden
beyond the veil of time

Any guess is welcome
can one ever see
what lies in the shadows of time
yet unborn .

Is it possible to visualize
what at the end of eternity lies

I many times tried walking in the darkness
my feet dried
I could not move an inch

today was about to become a yesterday
the sun rising twilight was about to be born
tomorrow would by now have become
another today
as sculptured yesterday
would have cleared its pathway
to be glorified as another day

burying another today
as a closeted
but memorable yesterday merged with infinity
clearing the veil
time proposed to for ever stay
leaving mankind in deep dismay

what behind the veils of time
for ever did stay .

Go man find another way
darkness for ever lives
since millennia till millennia

bear it as a dream
to come the next day
another meritorious today...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

another today... I get it. I have stood in the sunset, watching another day being buried and the night bringing a new day to replace it. I love your outlook on the passing of the days, and the birth of the new ones. ~ Geez.
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lovedly

I am compiling
ten poems of 2016

dug up by Ray
unread but by three

You will like those too
Give me a long breath
I sigh
ask me not why
Old age is axing in
except my brain
where
EGO
grins
Do read my
ODE TO GEE
Just begin

lol

Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
This is wonderful. The first two stanzas are especially thought provoking. It has the feel of a dream throughout, and your final stanza closes the thoughts nicely. I like this one very much.
Lav

lovedly

HOUR OF SADNESS
At our age
daily one needs to be ready
to go
else hear the sad news
one just goes
heaven knows

May those who have lived a long life
''REST IN PEACE ''
convey to all
as and when

Somewhere beyond beyond
many hope to meet
God keep hope alive
in one and all
As and when
'tis time

Rosewood Apothecary

I never really do this but I wanna move a thing I think.

burying another today
as a closeted
but memorable yesterday
merged with infinity
clearing the veil
time proposed to (forever) stay
leaving mankind in deep dismay

There I did it, I messed with your style. I do believe it’s forever. I may be wrong on that.

Tim