I can as all others
could or would do
spread fragrance
as you do
far and wide across the sunny horizon
lapping up the sounds of waves
in simple harmonic vibrations
your fragrance
shall spread
across many lands
bless the web
for communication
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https://www.neopoet.com/workshop/poems/fragrance-love
Comments
Nice presentation!
I like the title of the poem. The rhythm, with a fine ending.Your letter pours down and your style enchanting. The clouds of rhetoric and beauty condense, so it showers us with an outpouring of your charming alphabet.
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thanks
kindly
Fragrant Vibrations
Hello, Lovedly,
Back in 1986, Hands Across America was held in the USA. 6 million people across the county joined hands in an attempt to unify the country to help the homeless and beat poverty. It was a pretty amazing feeling. This poem has that same wonderful intention.
Thank you!
Lav
NOSTALGIC
How so sweet and kind of you
to make such a wonderful
comparison
thank you
Lav
MA'AM
You certainly do
It’s come to smell your fragrant words, unique and just ambiguous enough to properly ponder.
Tim