lovedly
lovedly
Dec 01, 2022

A DREAM IN PARTS

A DREAM IN PARTS
Just close your eyes
believe me

the same dream came
on two nights in continuum

'''No imagination ''

The first part sought presence
at cremation
the second day it came to say
not to come

the family has run amuck at random
no need to come
cremation done

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Dreams do they come true I ask you

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Candlewitch

after all these years in "our" company... I think we have finally warped you. I Love It!!!

* love & hugs, Cat

Geezer

what dreams lie in the hearts and minds of men?
Do they come alive if they have enough of some kind of force?
What is the magic of dreams?

Can they predict the future? Hmmmm...
I'm afraid that even after a big-send off, you will keep hanging around, yelling about how soon people forget. LoL
We won't forget too soon, don't worry. ~ Geez.
.

lovedly

It is my aspiration
from the Beyond
as you still insist
does exist

I shall send violin invisible strings
loaded with Romantic songs
these alone across the GLOBE
are common
You know it....

as long as men love women
now include the gender common

LOVE can never be forgotten
Sing a song
come along

Gee is the music of NEO
and will stay far on
till we love the Neos singing
a sweet love song

Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
A fickle dream - it tells you yes, then the next night tells you no. It's no wonder the family has run amuck at random. I would disagree with "No imagination." Your poetry, like your dream, is wonderfully alive with imagination. Thank you!
Lav