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Nov 26, 2022

Autumn's golden leaves miss me

Autumn golden leaves miss me
every time I chilled
in November.....
time's old age said ----
turn over...

came to a place
fairly warmer
you enjoy your golden
autumn leaves
turn over

knock knock
friends are
now over
feel warmer
dinner or whatever....

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

that I would classify this as a stream of thought piece. All good, although I am curious as to if the [turnover] rather than
turn over, is in regard to a pastry instead of the same turn over motion? Glad you had friends come over, [for dinner]?
Happy Holidays ~ Geez.
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Geezer

that it wasn't a turnover! I love hot turnovers from the oven and a nice cup of coffee or tea! LoL~ Geez.
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Rosewood Apothecary

You have a uniqueness that I can only describe as timbre. Nobody sounds like you even if they say the same thing. It’s something in music. Sax and trumpet can play the exact same note and yet sound totally different.

Love it
Tim