Melodies intertwined like gold filigree,
Mellifluous melodies must they be,
Echoing within cathedral walls,
A voice from which emotion calls,
Ancient, enticing and drawing one in,
To experiences never done or places never been,
Connecting with something not known,
Something felt but not shown,
As the chants come louder and unite,
A feeling of resolution and right,
A single voice to end what always had been,
Only to hear and never seen,
To some a deeper meaning drawn,
To others a mellifluous melody gone.
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Hello Dystopia
An awesome writing here. It has a very potential sonnet feeling to it.
Giving some attention to the syllable's count in each line you can turn it to a real mellifluous melody.
I liked the pleasing sound the M&M title that you've started with.
Looking forward to any edits if you decided to.
Thank you for sharing.
I'm sorry that...
this workshop didn't go the way it was planned. I had a good time with it, but I guess it was too complicated for some of the participants. Anyway, good job Mark, thanks for the opportunity to try something new! ~ Geez.
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