lovedly
lovedly
Nov 09, 2022

PASSIONATE KISSES

KISS WITHOUT PASSION
without any sensations
Oh man
what would be that kiss,
lifeless loveless,

two shadows
like ghosts in the darkness will meet
you say 'twill be a real kiss
yet doesn't match my wet lips,

let me tell you
I love to kiss...
any miss
any sis
mom,
my kiss perhaps some day
you may want ...

at times the passion is felt more
within than without
the physical passion you talk of
no doubt is momentary
but a passion of remembrance
is long term endless life time memory

we all love both
you as well as me
but what of a passion we speak
is simple composed as poetry

a passion indeed
with all our love
for this newest pan-sexual breed

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

L

Hi,

I really enjoyed how reflective this poem is about attraction and desire. I really liked this line "two shadows like ghosts in the darkness will meet." I feel like it does a great job expressing how, you use the word, "lifeless" it is to kiss without real passion. As someone who is on the asexual spectrum, I completely understand this feeling and I think your poem does a great job demonstrating it. Keep writing!

lovedly

why at just 20 ur asexual I wonder
life is given for once enjoy it
and
read my poetry its differently
ROMANTIC mostly,...
I love Ontario have friends and visit it as and when..
shall read you too TNKS
youngest friendly man

lovedly

I only my views relay
why should one
one's sexuality display
it's yours your own way
stay that way....
but
men later suffer from prostate if they don't do what
that.!!!
you know young poet.

I simply romanticism display no wanton way
Ha...