lovedly
lovedly
Nov 02, 2022

CANDLES GLORY

Leave Not
till the candle light continues

keep composing poems
till goes off the candle

even in darkness
I compose

FREE VERSE

so far all loved
my verse

gave me points
to hold contests

am I not a
poeyet?
I ask you all

About This Poem

Last Few Words: WHY LIGHT CANDLES

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

you are a poeyet. How could anyone doubt it? ~ Geez.
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Rula

Rula

2 years 5 months ago

You are a distinguished one, in a positive way.
You read all and all reads you
Even if they don't leave a word for you
Or two
Keep the candle's light on
Write on
You're the best.
Be yourself
Be you

lovedly

like a bird with wings hurt tries to fly again
I had released my caged parrot ...later I realized it couldn't ....but that one time it flew towards the black cloud
and dropped ...thank god not dead
We couldn't trace it then
but after a few days it returned
strangely picked a nut from my extended palm and flew

never came again
how I wish I
am like that lovely parrot too
when I go
I shall also be GONE....
just remember me will you....
all NEO

Lavender

Hello, Lovedly,
You are both the light and the reflection of light. Beautiful poetry from a wise poeyet.
L

lovedly

You are both the light and the reflection of light. Beautiful poetry from a wise poeyet.
You are a distinguished one, in a positive way.
You read all and all reads you
Even if they don't leave a word for you
Or two
Keep the candle's light on
Write on
You're the best.
Be yourself
Be you

I love that theme. How many timeless stanzas can be written under the light of one slowly burning candle?