When I dream, I dream of you
About the things I want us to do
Whenever we lay in our bed
These are the things in my head
I want us to fly on ecstasy wings
Where we can enjoy the nasty things
We would go too far away lands
Roam to wild places with our hands
Kiss with an unmatched passion
Make love like it was going out of fashion
We would extend the night into the day
Our imagination would have its way
When the sun in all of its majesty rose
We would have done things nobody knows
Comments
Wooo-hooo!...
I like this! It brings much to the imagination. Although I think that there is nothing much new under the sun, I get the idea of doing things that most people wouldn't think of. I was wondering, is the spelling of [too] deliberate, in the line: "We would go too far away lands."? Or just a Freudian slip? Nothing to critique otherwise. ~ Geezer.
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Thanks
Thanks Geezer. I used Grammarly and that was its suggestion.
Dream Nasty
Frolicking, 'eh?! YOLO!
Thanks for this one!
L
Welcome
You are welcome. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Bravo
I’d suggest that change Geezer was talking about. “To” not “too”.
I think this one hits the mark for me. I’m really super lucky in love. The wife and myself have ups and downs but we stay focused on working on our relationship every day and let’s face it, that includes sexual intimacy. It’s something we both value and put a lot of energy and thoughtfulness into the pursuit of it. Kids make it difficult and sometimes we swing and miss. We’re tired or kids get sick or whatever. I wish everyone enjoyed a relationship like ours. I know both of us harbor pretty much every sentiment you’ve captured here when we are both longing for each other.
May you find this person and find them again and again,
Tim
Thanks
Thanks Tim. I wish you both the best.
All the nasty things...
leaves the mind to wonder/wander! Get creative and do all the things no one else would think of! I second what Tim has said and hope you find that person over and over again,
Thanks
Thanks Rose for the comment.