Sen99
Sen99
Oct 20, 2022
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week October 16th to October 22 2022

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Poem without a Verb

3 lines almost too long
for the attention span
of an excited gnat

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nottinghamshire England, GBR

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Comments

Geezer

weird thought, that invited me in and gave me pause.
Not earth-shaking, but just weird, it made me ponder,
like WTH is he thinking? Anyway, it made me smile to think
that you and I had connected; you, thinking about writing it
and me thinking; WTH is he thinking? LoL
~ Geezer.
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Lavender

Hello, Sen,
Very nice! You've captured action, motion and movement.
Thank you!
Lavender