your family when your younger but especially in your twenties and people in high school
can do a real number on your self image even more so especially what your father
especially if your a boy can make you feel less worth and your mother
tey make you feel like a chameleon or like a fox or allways make sure your friends have a postive
image of your mind body and soul be carefull who you identify with in hollywood
Oct 15, 2022
impressions
About This Poem
Last Few Words: i hope this helps alot of people
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
I think that you...
should make an effort to discern the difference between [your and you're] which denotes your [possessive and you are].
As to helping people, I do believe that your heart is in the right place. ~ Geezer.
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