Kristen H.
Oct 08, 2022
This poem is part of the contest:

Neopoem Of The Week Contest October 9th to October 15th 2022

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Unshaken

Hidden and wild and sacred:
My thoughts.

Too cruel to be spoken
from the mouth of the innocent.

Too weak to be borne
from the heart that has endured.

Too loving to share with those
who will surely use them against me.

I write by my own hand
for if it were my voice
it would steadily tremble,
mumbled out of uncertainty,
stuttered and unsure.

Written on paper with pen,
my words are unshaken.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: USA - Georgia, USA

Favorite Poets: Lord Alfred Tennyson

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Comments

Rosewood Apothecary

It’s very good. The rhythm is perfect. The flow from one idea to the next is excellent. It is a brief but deep look into the introspective writing process. Great story telling right to the final lines which wrap it up with the title. Very well done.

Tim

Jackweb

I love the rhythm and its ending. Written in a concise form. Very comprehensible!
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RoseBlack

So much said in a short, elegant poem. Well done!