She came for a moment
a fleeting one
just to give me energy
Divine
she was drunk by my eyes
and like wine dissolved
into the universe
in a momentous moment
gave me the fruits of joy
men need most
of an intent
to creativity
a beautiful content
then in the eyes of god
she merged after that
monumentous moment...
devoid of all love and emotion
she did vanish
why did she have to come
a truthful heart
a soul banish
heaven alone knows
why so!
lovely poet she was
Comments
Reaallly nice
..lovedly. I think others will understand now why your writing is so inspirational. Your second stanza is pure poetry. The ending left me wondering.
One of your best!
Thomas
THANKS TO YOU AND GEE
YOU ARE SO NICE
at least you raise my morale
and
so make me feel
time as well spent
Excellent...
best I've seen from you in a while. Nothing I could find to criticize. ~ Geez.
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hi Gee
did u read me thanks brilliance of 2013.....all for neopoetreeeeeeeeeeeeeee
The muse in you!
You're indeed married to your muse. This is amazing creation. The beautiful rhythmic sweetness of the words brings an aesthetic to the reader's perspective in the poetic description of your mind.
Nice job!
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LEAVE NO POEM UNREAD
Hello, Lovedly,
Beautiful poetry and elegant language!
"lovely poet she was." Perfect ending.
L
Thanks LAV
Where have you been
long tyme
NO
C
HOPE ALL WELL
B
Hi, Lovedly!
I am well! I hope you are, too!
L
yeahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
yes well