Difference faces

My friends all wear different faces
Sometimes they lie but my heart still embraces
They use my love against me for any reason .
When will I find the friendship's I've been chasing
Regret and blame are my regular places
They are the nightmares that my mind embraces .
I I'm healing now because my true love said to me only my heart is the face you will ever see

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: Detroit Mi

Favorite Poets: my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music

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Comments

I got...

the story. I like the fact that you used near-rhyme in the fourth line and didn't really question it, because it was close enough.
I think you can do better with the last line.
Break it into two lines to read: I'm healing now, because my true love said to me
."My heart is the only face you will see.".
~ Geezer.
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