Timbo
Timbo
Aug 17, 2022

Little Man

There was joy, there was sorrow
there was darkness, there was light.
And then you came to be among us
on a cold and winter’s night.

The little miracle, we had hoped for
a gift to a father, of a son.
For this Grandad, a little playmate
And time together, full of fun.

For your Mother, what she hoped for
and it seemed would never come.
A little bundle of hope and joy
her very precious baby son.

With your smile you make us happy
if you’re sad we feel it too.
And our lives are so much better
when we spend our time with you.

You and me, we play together
football, cars, Spider-Man too.
In a world of fun and fantasy
that’s created by me and you.

When you grow to be older
and I can no longer be.
Hold me tight in your heart
and just remember me,

About This Poem

Last Few Words: My daughter gave birth to this little man in her forties. Medical circumstances made it difficult for her to stay pregnant and then, four years ago, the miracle happened. © 13 minutes ago, Tim Kitchen love • family • rhyme

Review Request Intensity: Please use care (this is a sensitive subject for me, do not critique harshly)

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: GBR

Favorite Poets: Rather than poets I tend to be influenced by songwriters and have a love of lyrics.

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Comments

Geezer

a great poem about the wishes and hopes of a grandfather for a little boy grandchild, that will carry on the legacy of his name and the great joy and expectations that come of it. Really good meter and rhyme. Nice job! ~ Geezer.
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Timbo

Thanks,
It's been a while since I was able to write anything, so thanks for the encouragement,

Take care,
Tim

Rosewood Apothecary

Struggles with fertility are so stressful. I have a niece I feel the same way about. My sister tried with her husband for seven years and treatments and saving embryos. In the end she had some fibroids removed and became pregnant immediately after. Like you say medical conditions were preventing viable pregnancies. I have a son that is 6 months older so it was an exciting phone call to learn that my sister was also pregnant. I remember I was in the kitchen at the stove cooking hamburgers and stinking up the house when she called to tell me. I’ll always remember that as long as I live.

I’m so happy for you and your family! Enjoy yourselves, revel in those fantasy games they’ll soon be memories!

Great job
Tim (a different one)

Lavender

Hello, Timbo,
Very tender! Truly a miracle! I hope you can frame this, somehow keep it preserved. It will become even more precious and meaningful as your grandson grows up.
Best to you all!
Lavender