Trouble
Trouble
Aug 11, 2022

There's no reason why

There's no reason why Julie came into my life. My sadness throughout my body. Was like a cancer that consomme ever wish and desire . I had a love that I thought we would bend the tracks of time. Unfortunately forever would be the saddness the day Brenda died. So one day Julie came into my life .l was hopeless without logic no reason to try. But hope gave me a reason when I looked deep into her eyes

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Country/Region: Detroit Mi

Favorite Poets: my poets are john Coltrane and Sarah Vaughan OK they are not poets but their music is reason that I write . I want my poetry to flow like their music

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Rosewood Apothecary

There's no reason why Julie came into my life
My sadness throughout my body
Was like a cancer that consumed every wish and desire
I had a love that I thought we would bend the tracks of time Unfortunately forever would be
the saddness the day Brenda died
So one day Julie came into my life
l was hopeless without logic no reason to try
But hope gave me a reason
when I looked deep into her eyes

Forgive my intrusion but I believe I fixed it?

I love it,
Tim

Rosewood Apothecary

There's no reason why Julie came into my life
My sadness throughout my body
Was like a cancer that consumed every wish and desire
I had a love that I thought we would bend the tracks of time Unfortunately forever would be
the saddness the day Brenda died
So one day Julie came into my life
l was hopeless without logic no reason to try
But hope gave me a reason
when I looked deep into her eyes

Forgive my intrusion but I believe I fixed it?

I love it,
Tim