What Life Means To Me Contest

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Buddha Says

Life is but a choice
Laundering dirty money
Or doing laundry

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Haiku

Style/Type: Structured: Eastern

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nottinghamshire England, GBR

Comments

Buddha Says

Hello, Sen,
Very clever, great structure, and a wonderful philosophy! Very wise!
Thank you,
L

Lavender Laundry awaits you

Hi thanks kind comment, have a great day

did you mean BUDDHA SAID

Now hear me

LOVEDLY SAYS
Have a wife
enjoy life
as and when
else marry strife
in lieu of women

Impressive

This is a very original idea. It’s inspiring and I’d like to use this concept as a part of my individual growth. I’ve been doing laundry forever and I’ll continue to do so.

Well done,
Tim

Keep Doing Laundry

Hi thanks glad it resonated with you, its nice to inspire someone else