Chiori
Chiori
Aug 08, 2022

Smilling posters

Crazy baboons
Confused yet not bothered,
Smilling and still paddling us back to yesterday,
Visionless fools with swollen stomach
of the nations fortune,
Termites I call them.

Beasts in human form
With no repentance,
Smilling faces on posters
Devilish minds
The cloud is gathering again.

Wise up, wise up now,
Better starve now
And not fall a victim to thier corn & cassava
Better starve and work
And stand  for a better future
Fight, brother fight.

About This Poem

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Nigeria , Abuja, NGA

Favorite Poets: John Donne

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Comments

Jackweb

I love the way you personified your title. The use of metaphor also added texture to the poem. It conveyed a vivid imagery which transcends the literal meaning of the words.

The poem: This is a full blow of words against the contemporary politicians. You're directly targeting your insult punch on Nigerian - greedy politician who have woefully failed in delivering a good governance to the masses.

As 2023 election is forth coming, all of them are now appearing on posters, televisions, newspapers yet, they continue making empty promises of things they can't even fulfill. We're watching them closely.

Well done!
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