Untamed maiden of the mountains,
You soar with golden eagles,
No malice has ensnared you,
As you roam in harmonious joy,
Dancing to the enchanting call of morning birds,
The mischievous wind your playful friend,
All the while from daunting heights,
You welcome the vastness before you,
Your essence enticed forth,
Encompassing all,
In hypnotic trance,
You are elevated,
Beyond conscious thought,
Unveiling the unconscious truth,
You have unraveled the riddles,
And are showered with the rain of wisdom,
Drenched,
Eternal balance your swaying chant,
As you are crowned mother earth.
Aug 02, 2022
This poem is part of the contest:
Neopoem of The Week Contest July 31 to August 6 2022
Mother Earth
About This Poem
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Not actively editing
Comments
Hello Wolff!
Very descriptive piece! I love the metaphor used in the title. This is a laudatory epithet!
Beautiful work!
.
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
Stunning
Again a beautifully written poem. Really impressive.
My fav:
Encompassing all,
In hypnotic trance,
You are elevated,
Beyond conscious thought,
Unveiling the unconscious truth,
You have unraveled the riddles,
And are showered with the rain of wisdom,
Drenched,
Eternal balance your swaying chant,
As you are crowned mother earth.
Super job,
Tim
Thank you!!
Thank you!!
dear C. Wolff,
soon the seasons will change again, as Mother Gaia turns the green leaves to vibrant colors. she reminds us of her powers... excellent write!
*hugs, Cat
Thank you so much!
Thank you so much!
Fantastic
Beautiful imagery wrapped in your immense love of nature and all that goes with it. I really enjoy your writing. Keep up the good work.
Thank you so much!!
Thank you so much!!