Arise
Shake the cobwebs
From your eyes
Face the ochre skies
Cadmium and lace
A pumpkin face
Brassy hair
Skin whiter than fair
Coral shore
Titian lore
Peaceful slumber
Wrapped in peachy haze
Tangerine dreams
Arise
Shake the cobwebs
From your eyes
Face the ochre skies
Cadmium and lace
A pumpkin face
Brassy hair
Skin whiter than fair
Coral shore
Titian lore
Peaceful slumber
Wrapped in peachy haze
Tangerine dreams
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism
Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft
Comments
Yes!
That’s a good title and a better poem.
Tim
Thank you
This was fun! Onward to the next color
dear RoseB.
I really like the way you have handled this challenge! extremely fanciful. thanks for answering the colors challenge!
*hugs, Cat
Hi Cat
Thank you for creating this challenge! It has been so much fun. I would like to see more informal challenges like this. The response has been widely received!
dear, RB,
you are entirely welcome, I'm glad you enjoyed it!
*hugs, Cat
p.s.
do you have some Taurus in any of your houses or moon sign?
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Maybe
I don't know how I would tell if there was Taurus
google it...
it might take a few tries, but knowing your DOB is the first step.