Just the smell of your perfumed wrist
Intoxicated, so much, I can no longer resist
Just the flick of your beautiful dark hair
Hypnotised, so much, I have to stop & stare
Just the touch of your silky smooth skin
Captivated, so much, you put my head in a spin
Just the glowing smile from your perfect face
Enamoured, so much, my heart begins to race
Just the sparkle from your crystal blue eyes
Enchanted, so much, I’m left simply mesmerised
Just the taste of your succulent moist lips
Infatuated, so much, you leave me totally transfixed
I’m just a humble wordsmith, a poet
I’ve fallen head-over-heels in love with you
I want to write you the perfect poem
With all the T’s crossed & all the I’s dotted
My Angel, with you…
…I have become besotted
Comments
dear One,
wow, you found inspiration... (can you teach this to Steve?)
beautifully written and yes...muse is generous today. I can find no fault with this poem. it is amazing to me, how you always find the perfect one word every time!
my favorite lines? the whole damned poem, lol!
*hugs & love, (the) Cat
Sis,
Just had a telephone conversation from my partner & these words came to me. I haven't even shown her yet. I'll probably hand write it & leave it under her pillow before I leave for work for her to find tonight when she gets into bed.
Thanks,
One
hello One
you got it bad...oh yeath I hope she is good to you.
ever, eddy
Sis,
she is perfect!
Please...
say "hello" for me.
* hugs, Sis
Dig it.
It’s awesome. Love the change up in the last stanza. Nice job.
Tim
Tim
I appreciate you taking time out to read & comment.
regards
One.