Thou shall be more amazed
as you read me more again
I am that light
that candle which
is lit
not by matches
but by flames of those
who ignite
reading my
in-core delight
poetry call it you might
'twill be an universal delight
Poetry is not alone
my birth right
when I am in sight
you read me well
but when the light's gone
you will say
O what the hell
poetry 'twas
O poet
anyone can tell
ere one rings
an alarm bell
poets alone can tell
you also may
if you are blessed
Comments
Liking this
until the end. if you were to edit it somehow, to be more like the rest of this fine piece, ....
Thank you Ray
you walk with me after a a very long day
Happy do stay
Many poems you have left astray
till this day
edit this one as you say
kindly you may
Suggestion
That you either eliminate the last two lines, or place them somewhere within the piece.
Thank you for the opportunity to make a suggestion.
Thanks Ray
for a week I shall be away
then do see
if I have followed ye
or let it b
this is not my last
poetic volley
I shall continue to rally
By or out of parental
legendary folly
how else will I a LEGEND EVER B
lol
dear Lovedly,
a very fine write, this! I loved these lines;
Thou shall be more amazed
as you read me more again
I am that light
that candle which
is lit
not by matches
but by flames of those
who ignite
reading my
in-core delight
I find myself in them. such a clever write!
*Love, Cat
Thanks Cats
Many liked it thanks again