Mr joghe
Mr joghe
May 10, 2022
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Thank You Lord

Thank you O lord;
You give life to the trees,
To hills and mountains,
Rivers flow gently for human kind,
Pebbles adore its beauty
And shades over its depth.

Thank you O lord;
You give life to the sun
To give life to the trees,
When its branches cut off;
It never stops reaching the light
With blooming flowers.

Thank you O lord;
You give life to air
Which comfort human every time,
Our sincere friend
We breathe in and out
To live some certain years.

Thank you O lord;
You give life to birds
To sing everyday a composed song,
Clearly in the heart of the forest
Without a trumpet.

Thank you O lord
For given us life.

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About the Author

Region, Country: Osun, NGA

Favorite Poets: William Wordsworth

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Comments

Candlewitch

this looks like a very nice poem. but I am not a believer in any organized religions god. besides that, I have sent you a "private message" (p.m.)

*hugs, Cat