A flamboyant flower

A flamboyant flower
taunts and
towers .
Over every
clever
clean green
clover .
That is left
to shrivel
itself away
within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Virginia, USA

Favorite Poets: Edgar Allan Poe homer Dante Alighieri Oscar Wilde

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The sibilant Ess...

snakes its way through this entire poem! I thoroughly enjoyed this! ~ Geez.
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Thank you

And I thoroughly enjoy your company.

Alliteration I use or alliterate one letter so it doesn’t get convoluted and it will have a nice flow.

hello Edward,

within the
senescent
shadows
of solemn
senile shrubs.

sounds like a get-together-dinner with my family!

*hugs, Cat

p.s.
I hope you are well

Thank you

Thank you for your comment I fully enjoy your presence.

I think you are writing better than ever

IMO a large improvement! Nice work!

Thank you

Well when you get used to writing the more you write. The more you will improve.