THREE P'S

There are more important issues today
to stop the world going astray

most important one is
Population
thus enhancing
Poverty
then greed of being
KING

Next you know it
what
the third P

This world is still running
we must take off our hats
Bow we must

Last Few Words: Populistic then humouristic

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

be poetry? nice job, lovedly.

*hugs, Cat

Cats thanks

the third one is Pride! lovedly is getting better by the day! Good stuff! ~ Geez.
.

Lovedly soonly has to b come an universal part
yes GEE
pride apart

lovedly, and it would have been obvious, if I hadn't made it more complicated than it is ;)

*hugs, Cat

Cats you are kind

could b any thanks to thee