Niagara Falls
I only wish you had been to Niagara
romance never ends there ever,
I would love to have one each day
come what may winter spring or snow
always makes sweet love grow
upon my life’s arc
there is a permanent glow
how I wish all of you
sooner than later to Niagara go
make the most beautiful
of all God's presentations of love
naturally within you flow
now stop short
you hearts palpitate
take a car
a flight right away
stay at any lovely
Niagara fall's over looking place
do stay
your romance will bloom
that’s what one can surely say.
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I've only been...
to Niagra Falls once, many years ago, but I've never forgotten the power that you feel from the thunderous roar of all that water. If anyone goes, they should definitely take the trip on the Maid of the Mist. It truly is a life changing experience! I can see why people write about it. Nice job Lovedly, you should get a job writing publicity about Niagra Falls! ~ Geez.
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YOU ARE SO LUCKY
Be happy GEE
THANKS GEE AND NEOPOETS FOR THIS
Nice job Lovedly, you should get a job writing publicity about Niagara Falls! ~ Geez.
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hi loved
Last line first stanza is a bit Yoda sounding. Maybe "Always makes sweet love grow"? Perhaps one day I'll get a chance to go to the falls...........
Stan
thanks done