I DREAM OF YOU

So many years
have been -blossomed by time
I've always taken you for granted
you know it

Now comes the hour
hence forth
I must entrap you in my heart
for the remaining time
then you will continue to be
a part of me
here and there
everywhere I go
you will also
make me glow
this poem
I composed for you
hope you will know

About This Poem

Last Few Words: REVISITED COURTESY STAN scribbler

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

A lovedly ...

sentiment. I hope a part of me can go with you also. Just the good part, though, okay?

Always

So beautiful so kind of you
thanks as always

Hi loved

Don't we all take time for granted? Alas the supply is not endless."To make me glow"....seems forced for some reason; try deleting "to" and see if it works better

MY FRIEND PHILO WHAT AND GUIDE

I MUST ABIDE Thanks Stan

IMHO this piece

Is the best one you have posted in awhile!
I’ve no suggestions here
Thank you for this!

When I'm kicked

I become the best footballer
I kick the ball far
likewise 'tis for poetry
this poem is being carried around the world
by inty meaning INTERNET
Many Thanks
our NEOPOET
Ray