Obadiah Grey
Obadiah Grey
Dec 15, 2021

ARRGGHH! She's gonna have to go !!

A POX !! -- A POX !!!
upon the man
that flogged my wife
this camper van,
and told her "please don't
worry dear
that damp patch here
is nothing queer,
it's merely steam
and condensate
that's dripping on your
empty pate"...

Obi.

About This Poem

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: int'topfield, GBR

Favorite Poets: Felix Dennis

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Geezer

all the lines about making assumptions; I'm going to do just that. I am assuming that your wife bought a campervan, and she got cheated. I will also assume that the empty plate you write about, is the empty pockets that resulted from the buying. At any rate, the story is interesting enough to keep one reading and speculating. ~ Geez.
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Triskelion

..but I have to throw this out there. I wonder what this would read like if you changed two words ie...flogged to shagged and "on" your empty pate to "from" your empty pate.

Thomas