''As my time is nearing
the coast of time
soon I may also be
non -existent.''
A very young girl
we knew
just went into the operation room
said
‘'meet you on the other side.''
we all stand by the banks of a river
when the stream will engulf us
no one knows ever
we just look blank
into wilderness
who is calling us
she came int my dreams
said
‘‘Friend come over
its fun and frolic here
Oh you need not fear''
impressed by her great
intense message
she spoke to me
before she really departed
I felt a surge
like she was calling me
she was too young
much younger than most
but the unknown force
can call any one
any time
just anyone
no fuss
worry not our fraternity
time is always a mystery
those who come must go
but when
Even heavens do not know.
That is the best part of the living show
Comments
I find your piece..
..disturbingly parallel with something I had written for a lost one. I find your work extremely creative and inspiring. Be well, lovedly and know that your art is only fleeting to people who lack vision.
And keep writing!
Thomas
MIGHTY THANKS
TRISK
reading you there is no risk I am original creativity energy now many know it you too
Let all fly if they wish to
Dear lovedly, your poem is
Dear lovedly, your poem is also emotionally disturbing to me. I've lost two young sons, as you most likely remember, at a very young age. Keep writing and touching other poets' hearts.
Gracy ma'am
do you recall you had given this title thanks ma'am many have liked it truth pierces the inner hearts of those emotional