Autumn arrives again
trees wind stripped-nudity
gals dance about a pole
shed their clothes like lifeless leaves
they show all lay beneath skin
no fruits dangling
apples and bananas
no breasts
no busts
all cast
as autumn arrived today
oldies too walk about in autumn
like me and you
dance about in the park
semi nude no hat
if trees can show
can't they
all ask me
you can't simulate trees
many autumns all have seen
naked like multi colored autumn leaves
Comments
Shed...
not shred. Unless you are implying that the wind has ripped their clothes off! ~ Geez.
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Thanks typo
shed
will correct Gee
shred was corrected
still no one read it LOL
LOVEDLY IS NOW OLD
Shred was not...
corrected! Sometimes we just don't get read! I read it! ~ Geez.
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hi loved
comparing the shedding of leaves and clothes works well here.
THANKS STAN
kindness for the read