I try to be a person,
A man in a world of man,
And when that fails,
I try to be myself,
How Ironical,
That people misunderstand,
They interpret my true being,
For something totally else,
When people see me for who I’m not,
It makes me feel like I’m Not.
Last Few Words: I like my poems to be understood by all people, not necessarily the ones who know how to break down a Shakespeare to the minute details. Have I accomplished it here?
Style/Type: Free verse
Review Request Direction:
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft
Comments
Yeah...
I understand...Welcome to Neo! Hope you find lots of people who understand what you write and it brings you pleasure.
~ Geezer.
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Be the Iron you want to be
why eye vision of others
that's what I meant
You are right. what I
You are right. what I describe in my poem is what happens if you do take a glimpse at their direction. Thanks for the feedback!!
I like the idea here and the
I like the idea here and the execution.
Welcome to the website!
nice piece...
not too sure about the last line. that second 'not'
seems like your piece will be well understood by most folk.