lovedly
lovedly
Jul 23, 2021

My Flowery Youth...(Edited by Gee)

Youth is a fountain
which must one day dry
Within our aging skin
and beneath balding hair
our hearts can remain youthful

In our aged dreams
we can water youthful hearts
the youngster still remains
and needs only memories to feed on
Pause; a comma, is not a coma
if our lonely hearts are still strong

Oh youth, do not flee
be free, be free
Take me, take me

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Geezer

Youth is a fountain
which must one day dry
Within our aging skin
and beneath balding hair
our hearts can remain youthful

There is more, but I leave it to you to figure it out.

The rest:

In our aged dreams
we can water youthful hearts
the youngster still remains
and needs only memories to feed on
Pause; a comma, is not a coma
if our lonely hearts are still strong

Oh youth, do not flee
be free, be free
Take me, take me

~ Geez.
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lovedly

in your youth you would have been heartthrob of many lol you are free Geeeeee

Youth is a fountain
which must one day dry
Within our aging skin
and beneath balding hair
our hearts can remain youthful

In our aged dreams
we can water youthful hearts
the youngster still remains
and needs only memories to feed on
Pause; a comma, is not a coma
if our lonely hearts are still strong

Oh youth, do not flee
be free, be free
Take me, take me

~ Geez.

Geezer

you liked what I did, you put it all together well. ~ Geez.
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