Michael Anthony
Michael Anthony
Jul 18, 2021

Butterfly

Blossom with light wings
Where will your travels take you?
Find me on the blooms

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Haiku inspired by my encounter with a beautiful butterfly this morning - wish I could include the photo I took of it - amazing!

Review Request Direction: What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

About the Author

Region, Country: San Francisco Bay Area - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Bukowski

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Comments

Geezer

the comparison of the butterfly to a flower's bloom; which is something that they mimic, as a camouflage. I can see, in mind's eye, the butterfly winging it's way amongst the flowers and delighting you. Nice job in bringing the thought to view. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

for the well wishes of good health. I'm good as can be expected. I have used and abused my body terribly in my 73 yrs. of life, so all things considered, I feel lucky to be in as good shape as I am. ~ Geez.
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Triskelion

are mystical creatures. It's a wonder how they get from one place to another with such erratic flight characteristics, but they certainly have managed for eons.

Thomas