scribbler
Jul 11, 2021

OLDIES

Sitting on this cloudy day
beyond the panes where squirrels play;
I hardly pay them any heed
none of their antics played at high speed.

For I'm immersed in sixties songs
of love and fear, of rights and wrongs
that carry me back to the time
when I'd not written a single rhyme.

Back to friends no longer here
Back to my first taste of beer
Back to youth lived wild and free
Back to discovering the real me.

I close my eyes I'm almost there
with that young girl with whom I'd share
a life time of joys and sorrows,
all my yesterdays , all my tomorrows.

I think of those who have loved me
that time has shed like leaves from a tree
till now very few rattle in the wind
as they and I approach our end.

I sit listening, remembering
as guitars strum the ghosts sing
taking me back to that lost place.
Why,now, do tears stream down my face?

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: South Carolina, United States, USA

Favorite Poets: Frost

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Comments

Ray Whitaker

to colorado. it's been sorta hard to keep up with things lately due to that. Plus am working on getting a new book ready for publishing.

I'm going to need to pass on the workshop this time. I would like to be considered for a future one, tho!

lovedly

how we are still surviving
in a FOOL'S PARADISE
just awaiting the realisation
of what a silly life is
hopefully
nice stan you got published
hope you will feel happy
some one still reads ye

LIKE SHAKESPEARE
he turns in his grave
may be three times daily
may you long live

lovedly

LORD SIR etc are on merit
or they must be rich
blue blood maybe
you deserve it more than any'
particularly me
lol

Candlewitch

some great bits of nostalgia within this piece! I cane relate and identify with many lines. your wisdom shines through.

*hugs, Cat

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