I’m the one who
tends to walk
away from the crowd.
For I find their
feathers of friends
much to
lively and
lustered in
Loudness.
Starting off
sweet soft
and low.
Letting the
rhythm flow
One
Two Three .
One
Two three
one
Two three.
.
Comments
edward
in place of tread (2nd line) try using the word walk and see if you prefer that
also what do you think of this in place of row perhaps flow