Entwine two cobras
Ego and narcissist
which one would devour who
the two are almost
but not really equal
Dr Jekyll or Mr Hyde
I know a dearest
one behind the other
everyday hide
then it made me decide
to alter my ego to where only narcissists go
I laid besides a swimming pool
not accepting I couldn’t swim
then stripped to birthday suit
smelt me and confided
the beauty that I saw
never ever existed
let me ride
I turned over and into the water
no more ego nor even a shadow
winters snow did freeze
perhaps another birth may be
but never anyone like me
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Hey Lovedly,
No critique...just everything I expect from a poet like you: simple in structure, layered with meaning and vision, powerful in timelessness.
How do I thank thee
tell me
That's my man...
lovedly! I guess you aren't about to give up the title just yet! ~ Geez.
.
The me in me speaks
to those
who consider me as
mine
lol Gee yes its still EGO-ME
Thanks
yes
we are all different and that's a good thing. wouldn't it be boring if we were otherwise?
thanx
scribbler