c lynn brooks
May 02, 2021

The Absence of Reality

I've tasted the fruit Of the vine

and its bittersweet reality

when hearts do intertwine

into where they should not be

there is nothing so exciting as

a fleeting thought of you.

alone in the night, I whisper your name

yet knowing it will never be true

I still hope for that which isn't mine

and a charmed life with you.

About This Poem

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

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Region, Country: north carolina usa, USA

Favorite Poets: Leonard Cohen

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Candlewitch

thanks for doing a co-write with me. your contribution was excellent!

*hugs, Cat

C

Thank you I love co writing with you