THE CHANDELIER

When the CHANDELIER fuses
one remembers
the light that was
and
hopes some day
some one may replace
the beauty
the glamour the charm
that there ever was

The light has gone
the world stepped
into darkness
no Neopoet
condoled
a sad reflection

About This Poem

Last Few Words: Had Ian of UK been here...the world would have instantly known

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

Comments

This conveys “missing” and “loss”

Nicely, for such a short piece. A great example of “more is less” in word usage.

Thank you RW

for your views so soon

Thank you dear RAY

Revised you may refresh perhaps

Like your revision

I noticed the difference. Who are you missing?

Hello RW

I am not missing the world is