Friend
open-minded
always there
never judging
gentle and fair
since the beginning
this is you
a solid beacon
in the darkness shining through.
in those times
when I come undone
a word from you
and I cease to run
my touch-stone
wise and sure
you are like no other
your intentions pure...
my dear friend!
(thank you!)
Review Request Direction:
What did you think of my title?
How was my language use?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How does this theme appeal to you?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?
Is the internal logic consistent?
Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back
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Comments
We miss your views
We miss you
cw
thank you lovedly...
I have missed you all, too.
*hugs, Cat
Cat
Your poem makes me wish I were that friend . But I am sure you mean Steve but I also see you have not lost your touch. So good to see you back
no, dearest Chrys...
this poem is about you. and I mean every word of it. you have always had a most profoundly calming effect on me.
*love, Cat
Cat
and once again you have me in tears. Cat thank you ever so much
Not a thing...
to criticize! Hopefully, we will see more of you this year. You have missed much and it is good to see you posting again!
~ Geez.
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Sir Gee!
it is great to hear from you! thank you for the lovely response...I've missed you!
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