lovedly
lovedly
Apr 04, 2021

IF I WERE NOT TO BE

After an audition I did see
everyone crying even me

Singing a song
for a dying daddy
and
he besides mommy
also weeping

Oh what a grave situation can it be
have you ever imagined
so let me see
I still here be

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

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Comments

Geezer

been as perceptive as Teddy, and might have thought that it was an actual funeral. Whatever. I did appreciate the fact that it was emotional. Nice job! ~ Geez.
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