VanRyan
VanRyan
Feb 11, 2021

A Valentine Sonnet 21

When I compare my wife to any one
I think I see in her some hidden flaws;
But when I shut my erring eye, move on,
The honest one will give me cause to pause:
She stands by me in life’s oft rugged ride
Without complaints throughout my restless days
And takes my pain-filled moods in patient stride,
Expecting no rich gifts nor lavish praise.
She lives up to her marriage vows with gladness.
I love her, not because she tends to me
Should I be trapped in blues or gloominess.
She is my wife, the friend she strives to be,
Our hearts are truly one; they intertwine;
Therefore, she is my only Valentine.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?
How does this theme appeal to you?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Not actively editing

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Region, Country: Arizona, USA

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Comments

Lavender

A beautiful Valentine, Jerry! You and your wife, your friend, and your Valentine are blessed, indeed! I always enjoy your sonnets! Happy Valentine's Day to you both!
Thank you!
L

VanRyan

yep, we hit it off quite well, the little lady and I. Thank you for the Valentine wishes, and we wish you the same.
Jerry

VanRyan

thank you very much for reading, and commenting on the above sonnet. Very nice of you, and I appreciate that. Jerry/van

Rula

Rula

4 years 2 months ago

I guess.
I especially like the closing couplets.

VanRyan

thank you for the nice comment; its been much appreciated, truly. Wonderful hearing from from you, dear lady.
Jerry van K.

Breakinglogic

Jerry, pardon the random comment, I've had this open in a browser tab for months ha!
I enjoyed this Valentine's sonnet. The diction seemed to fit the format well. I really like the way line 7 turned out. It is very phonetically appealing!