Solarly Creator

If any
is
Sun

it ignites and flames
and does every one
burn
then
finally
churn

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - polished draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

I can understand why this has been ignored for over a year.

what is ur understadning

To be frank, it's not very good.

you are frank
man
but u must say why show ur ability to critique anyone can just form an opinion just one

Sorry I don't understand your sentence.