VanRyan
VanRyan
Jan 23, 2021

Aurora

Aurora, you are the glowing dawn
that follows night; but should
I rejoice? You drive the hours
of blest oblivion away,
and then my heart festers.

Let me embrace the safer darkness
once again. She is the joyless epoch
that promises nothing;
nothing I expect; but at least
she is consistent without a promise
in her nothingness.

Let me remain in my starless world
and thus survive, for your radiance
would only melt the essence that seals
my heart’s fissures. Aurora—you are beautiful,
but so is the deadly cone shellfish.
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About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How was my language use?

Review Request Intensity: I appreciate moderate constructive criticism

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Arizona, USA

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mddy

4 years 3 months ago

Your language usage is unique and enchanting! Love this piece!

VanRyan

I'm so pleased my poem resonated with you; so, let me tell you that I appreciate your comment very much, and I hope you will be happy here on this forum. Thank you for the nice comment. Jerry/Van.

Geezer

use, is always great and I was led into the chasm of depressing shadows; deeper and away from the light of day, where you would have to examine the pain of living with your obvious hurt. A tale best told in the darkness. ~ Geez.
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VanRyan

As always, thank you for your comments. It's very much appreciated. Jerry/Van