Rula
Rula
Jan 16, 2021
This poem is part of the contest:

Out At Sea

(Read More...)

God's Mysterious Legend [January Contest]

When Gracious God had created thee,
He also created the precious sea,
He created the sky, the brightest moon,
and created the inestimable boon.

From free drops of love the legend was born,
with every secret that's peacefully thrown,
to keep the memories, those that are waif,
with cautious corals, they're always safe.

For decades now, the legend still alive
with all the mysteries that deep down dive.
A legend that blooms with a virgin lotus,
for it's God's most magnum opus.

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Jordan, JOR

Favorite Poets: I favor the ones who are closer to humanity and

This user supports Neopoet so it can be free to all

More from this author

Comments

Rula

Rula

4 years 3 months ago

Your comment means a lot. I am happy too that my pen found it's way back.
Thanks for your wishes dearest friend.

Geezer

joy at the natural order of a plan. Only one little crit. I would delete the [s] from the legend in the "For decades now, the legend's still alive" making it: [For decades now, the legend still alive] Not a big deal, but I think that it makes it a bit smoother.
~Geez.
.

Rula

Rula

4 years 3 months ago

Geezer. I didn't like it either :) but I didn't want to sacrifice grammer for a smoother read.
Appreciate your visit and the thoughtful feedback.