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in soft
Simple
refrain.
With the
Pleasant
Pitter patter
Of rain against
My weak white
wooden window frame.
And oh the sensational
sight of that
Superlative light
that loves to
illuminate my
room with the dark
audacious yet filled
with
Immense animosity.
The brotherly
color of blue .
Jan 13, 2021
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Hello, Edward,
This is quite beautiful. I love the alliteration and the soft language. I am especially taken with the beautiful description of the superlative light encompassing the room filled with animosity. Your last line is both gentle and bold. Visually soothing.
Thank you,
L
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Thank you for your opinion I’m glad you liked it