After checking the oil for the chain
and a quick pull on the starter rope
my father’s chainsaw cuts through the branches
stainless steel teeth offer no quarter
The quickly turning blade suggests danger in unsure hands
regardless, his grip is firm and confident
Swift and experienced strokes
make short work of the green and sap-filled wood
Fine powder sawdust drifts across my arms
we stack the severed pieces in neat and orderly piles
I envy the purposefulness of it all
Different than our relationship
the thorns and twisted branches of it
wrongs and mistakes never acknowledged
And certainly never talked about
but this shared task seems to dress uneasy wounds
as we work together in the haze of the oily blue exhaust
Comments
Wow Teddy! I hope you were
Wow Teddy! I hope you were not present when that accident occurred! Not something one could forget. Glad you liked this one, and sorry for the momentary stress it seems to have caused =)
Working with your Father
One of the ways men seem to get along best is working together, IMHO. I remember the projects with my Dad fondly. We didn’t necessarily speak too much while accomplishing the job at hand, however stout commo happened nonetheless.
Good for you!
Completely agree with you
Completely agree with you about getting along while working together. Always appreciate you sharing your thoughts - cheers!
Fathers teach a lot
and
from kids learn more
newer Gen Z
u know now
UR MA tho
I guess...
never having had a real relationship with a father-figure, I can't
answer to the theme of the poem; however, I really enjoyed the
scenario. I do have good memories of cutting firewood and you describe
the scene perfectly. There is a certain satisfaction in doing a job well
and especially one that has a good purpose, so I do get that part of it.
~ Geezer.
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