Geezer
Geezer
Dec 07, 2020
This poem is part of the contest:

Scrooge Contest

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Christmas Cookies... [December contest]

"When the ghost of Christmas future
Sat down next to me
I was just a little startled
Almost spilled my @#&*ing tea!"

He said; Yo man,get a grip
I had to stop, I felt the need
This Covid stuff's a bitch
Ya got some real good weed?

"I was just about to roll one
Boy, this night has been a blast
I was visited by your brothers
The Present and the Past"

"I didn't want to see behind me
I was a lonely kid
I didn't want to see it
But he made sure I did"

"So I baked some Magic Cookies
To take away the pain
Have a couple, it's on me"

"Hope he don't come back again" [aside]

"Have a snack, celebrate the future
But no more rides tonight..."

No, you're good, my man
These cookies make me bright

About This Poem

Style/Type: Structured: Western

Review Request Direction: What did you think of my title?
What did you think of the rhythm or pattern or pacing?
How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - draft

About the Author

Region, Country: New York State - USA, USA

Favorite Poets: Poe

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Geezer

Geezer

4 years 4 months ago

In reply to by Teddy15

I wrote this to be short and in the contest. I am working at a much longer one, and will post it in a couple of days. It goes beyond the three ghosts and I hope that it will be as funny as it's going to be long. Maybe I will post it as a series, ya know?
This is great fun and something to take my mind off this Covid stuff. Glad you had a chuckle. ~ Geez.
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Geezer

the cow one is one of my favorites too. Cows are such comical creatures. Thank you for your support, I'm glad to give a laugh whenever you need one. ~ Geez.
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Michael Anthony

Excellent poem Geezer! I really liked the last two stanzas too. After reading this, I'm going to have to seriously rethink my toll house cookies recipe...

Gracy

Gracy

4 years 4 months ago

Hi Geez, I've had a good laugh, thank you, I needed it. I fancy Santa having weed...lol. Yes, one tries to forget about the past and nowadays not even think of the future. But your poem, nonetheless, is full of cheer. The rhyming is excellent, as usual. So is the title, spacing and all else.
I think it's too soon to wish people a happy Xmas, so just keep safe, Gracy