O WHAT A MELODY

I search for melody
in my remains
as I wake up and see
is blood still flowing in my veins

I have the sister
take my BP
She smiles at me

Sir

I can still hear your heart beat
relax now go to sleep
why do you weep

the world is still asleep
you have woken up too early

go see the libraries
people are reciting
your poetry
O what a melody

keep at it
the world still needs
O dear thee
what a
melody

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

Region, Country: UNIVERSE...ETERNITY C/O ME, ROU

Favorite Poets: All across the Internet whom I read

tnx
so far so good still alive
masked

Still a poet to be read. ~ Geez.
.

You are life and sole of LOVEDLY
on neo yet

go see the libraries
people are reciting
your poetry
O what a melody

keep at it
the world still needs
O dear thee
what a
melody

Beautiful in every singing of it...

you have the makings
of a poet in history
Irenicus

that's very flattering, lovedly.

sonny
be at it
poetry is not everyone's cup of tea
I know very little of it still
but thousands read me
at their own will