Scorpions All

All scorpions are
Venomous beings,
On earth
As in heaven
Rarely,
Very rarely if at all,
Do they lead blissful lives
Nor do they
Appreciate others,

You are an angel
And you know it,
Great verses
You create
Friendly
Mate...

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Country/Region: ROU

Comments

scorpions

It's hard to imagine a happy scorpion isn't it? I would consider deleting the Question mark, and believe in line 8 you may have meant they instead of them. I am sure you made the angel you refer to's day............scribbler

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A N G E L

I must say
at times my computer overrules me
without my knowing.
Thanks for ur keen friendly observation
thanks friend
How I wish Neopoet had
more like uuuuuuuuuuuuuu

thanks

the best thing was on the other site,
even scorps liked it

how true some said
take care happy week.... end