raj
Jul 14, 2020

Large or Small, have your fill

I thought for a while,
should I or should i not,
I had just finished one
then remembered the gospel
"only one per day"
be it large or small,
sounded cruel

so I made a large one,
then one more before bed,
then another,
finishing them one after the other
to put my mind at ease
before calling it a day,

did I cheat anyone?
I chuckled
"certainly not"
because in the end
I unchecked the option to Publish

About This Poem

Style/Type: Free verse

Review Request Direction: How was the beginning/ending of the poem?

Review Request Intensity: I want the raw truth, feel free to knock me on my back

Editing Stage: Editing - rough draft

About the Author

Region, Country: Somewhere in the world, IND

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Comments

Lavender

Hi, raj,
It sounds like your muse was alive and kickin'! Hope you eventually hit the Publish button for the others! It is so true that the poem in your mind has to be finished before you can put your mind to ease.
Very nice!
L

lovedly

size doesn't matter at all
all is in the mind
drink as much
what else is life meant for
affect must be obtained
life is a one time bliss
you may say kiss
singer ye b
not me
raj_bby

R

raj

4 years 9 months ago

thanks for the read....good to know you caught the humor....

be well friend..

Geezer

running around in your head, plus so much more, must be like having to cut a wild horse from the herd and letting the others run free again, hoping to recapture them later. Good thing we have our electronic diaries to help out. Nice! ~ Geez.
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R

thanks for taking time to read and comment. Good to know you found it nice.

be well..